Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Bait and Switch


I threw it on the ground and burst into tears
I'd given you everything
All of these years
Believed all the promises
Allayed all my fears
Made an investment
And got no return
Waiting for smolder 
My heart got the burn
 I swallowed my words
'Cause what could be said
It's written in stone now
Flat lined, pronounced dead
Words taped to the door 
I rose from our bed
And it seemed more unreal
Each time that I read
Am I really this clueless
Did I not read the signs
Have I been in denial
Or just deaf, dumb and blind
Now none of it matters
Gotta leave it behind
No more my Valentine
No more my lover
The engagement is off
You left me for my brother

                                                      
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36 comments:

  1. Coffee snorted...you continue to amaze me with your wit. Loved this.

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    1. Haha - thanks T. - I appreciate that! My apologies to your wet keyboard. ;)

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  2. I was all sniffing at the pain, remembering how it felt to feel this way...and then that last line got me! Very clever and funny - and I LOVE funny poetry, if it's clever. ;)

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    1. thanks so much natalie! glad i had you goin' for a bit!

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  3. It does have a great cadence. When ya writing the song? I would LOVE this song :)

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    1. I'm glad you said that, because I wrote it as a lyric, so I'll have to work on the music next. :)

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  4. This is great! I am also in love with the cadence. Wonderful build up to a truly excellent ending!

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  5. Awesome! Like Kristin -- I totally read this as a song! Record and post, please! :-)

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  6. I love these lines -
    "It's written in stone now
    Flat lined, pronounced dead"

    Great poem . . . love the unexpected ending!

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  7. I'm gonna need to hear this one done live. At a Starbucks. Maybe in Cleveland ;)

    Awesome.

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    1. You got it, girl! Venti mocha folka lot aye served up Cleveland style!

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  8. Brilliant! I do love an inverse valentine - and in verse too! I enjoy the fluidity of your poetry.

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    1. I appreciate that Georgina. Thank you so much!

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  9. I just loved the end of this. Fantastic.

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  10. I so agree -- the ending was perfect, yay!!

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  11. Great build up to an unexpected end. And in agreement with above comments, this is a song waiting to happen.

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    1. I'm gonna work on the music and post it here! :)

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  12. Ha ha :) It is sad, but it did make me laugh!

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  13. Awesome ending!! I'll chime in with the the rest that think this is a song waiting to happen

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